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  • June 9
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Hey everyone! I am Brendan also known as Bclement117. I am a science fiction writer writing my own science fiction novel called Hybrid. I have been working on this story for such a long time. I have been bringing this story to life by writing it and posting these chapters to this website. After I finish writing this book, I will publish it and write more books in this series. This is for all you fans that love sci fi and fantasy. Please feel free to read the first chapters of my novel. I am open to any comments and suggestions! Enjoy!

Favourite genre of music: Metal

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Epica, Amaranthe, Arch Enemy, Dragonforce, Kamelot, Slipknot, Five Finger Death Punch, Nightwish, Delain, Hammerfall, Sabaton
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J. K. Rowling
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Halo, Mass Effect, Witcher
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Hello Everyone, I have been busy all summer. I have been writing 3 new chapters for the reboot version of Hybrid. I have put a lot of effort into each of those chapters. I am looking forward to what you think of this reboot story so far. I hope you all want to read more. Here are the chapters, Chapter 6: Chapter 7: Chapter 8:
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Am I copying Star Wars with my novel?
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Hello

Thank you for the :+fav: !!

Who are some of your writing influences?
Where do you pull inspiration from?
Who else reads your work outside of DeviantArt? 
What would you say is the #1 thing you need to improve upon as a writer?

Sorry for the questions, but let's say I'm curious.

I am glad you asked.


The writers who influenced by writing were J.K Rowling, DJ Machale, Rick Rick Riordan. I pull my inspiration from many science fiction sources such as Star Wars, Terminator, Halo, Mass Effect, and Greek Mythology stories. The people who had read my work outside DeviantArt were my friends Danny and Aaron. I need improvement on creating stories that flow and fixing grammar.

Ok, now is Hybrid aimed at the YA market?
Those are good influences for Science Fiction for sure. Do you go by the visual storytelling and plots of the movies/games or do you also read the books associated with them?
What kind of constructive criticism do your friends give you and do they discuss it with you openly?
Grammar story structure are all things I had trouble with too. And there are many different ways to address those things.
How often do you get official feedback from the writing community?
Ever attend Writing workshops or classes?

I am planning on having Hybrid be rated M for mature because of highly detail violence/gore, language, and other inappropriate material. I was going by visual storytelling and plots in movies/games. My friends kept telling me to show instead of tell and expand on certain scenes. I don't much feedback as I use to on Deviantart anymore despite me adding my work onto groups.

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You are awesome my friend.