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Chapter 33:
Virtual Theater

    “Damn it!” Alexander shouted. “They trapped us here!”

    “Now how the hell are we going to get out here?” Aoife asked Alpha.

    Alpha spun around as he scanned. “The Helbots wouldn’t trap us here if they need to get the codex. There must be another way they would get in.”

    Yuya said. “Let’s get that codex before they do.”

    “The problem is that we don’t know what it looks like and where exactly it is,” said David.

    “We must proceed inside if we want to find the codex and escape,” said Alpha.

    They walked down the corridor of computer grids flickering around. At the end of the hallway, they found themselves at the top of a twenty-five story room. Each floor had walkways with metal rails. As they walked around the first floor, Alexander noticed metal templates sticking out from the walls.

    “Alpha, do you know what these are?” he asked.

    Alpha scanned the templates. “Ah, those are blueprints. They are electrical devices used to display information on specific topic. One might be about math, science, history, entertainment, or anything. It depends on what blueprint you pick up.”

    “Why would the Mechanoids make a library?” Alexander asked. “If they were machines, they would have databanks in themselves. It wouldn’t make sense to build a library.”

    “How do you read it?” Vyla asked standing next to Alexander as she looked at it.

    “The power button is at the top of the blueprint,” said Alpha. “Once it is on, it would play something or give you virtual pages.”

    Alexander pushed the button on the blueprint. Holographic images popped out of the screen like a pop-up book. The images adjusted into alien writing. The writing looked Chinese writing, but the lines were more angular and spherical. Then a voice spoke from the blueprint in a strange language, Alexander thought it sounded like a woman speaking a combination of Latin with Egyptian. Everyone looked at each other strange as they never heard that sound before.

    “Alpha, what’s this language?” Alexander asked.

    “I don’t know,” said Alpha. “Let’s me translate it.”

    Alpha picked up the blueprint and scanned as he tried to find an external hard drive port. He inserted his finger into the blueprint. Then the writing and voice changed to English. It spoke, “Welcome to The Sora System GuidePrint, where you will learn about the Sora and its’ planets that orbit around. Where would you like to begin? Here is the table of contents.”

    A list of chapters hovered above the screen of the blueprint. Alexander had a lot of questions as he turned on this device. What is the Sora System? Where is it? One of those questions was the first chapter.

    He asked, “What’s the Sora System?”

    The image changed from the table of constants to a star similar to the Sol, but with nineteen planets in orbit. Most of them were gas giants three times bigger than the Sol’s gas giants. Others were rocky planets with an atmosphere absent. There was only one planet that was like Earth, but smaller.

     The blueprint spoke again, “The Sora System is a star system located 25,000 light years from the galactic core. It has 10 terrestrial planets, 8 gas giants, and 1 planet named Vania. Eve is the only planet in the galaxy known to have an atmosphere to sustain life.”

    Vyla raised her eyebrows. “Only planet to sustain life?”

    Aoife agreed. “There are other planets in the galaxy that have life. This makes no sense.”

    “There is more to this than we thought,” said Alexander. “Alpha when was this blueprint made?”

    “According to my readings,” said Alpha. “It was published 12 billion years ago.”

    Alexander’s jaw dropped. “12 billion years ago?!”

    Alpha nodded. “According to the coordinates it gave us, the Sora System is now a red giant known as HE 1523-0901. It is now one of the oldest stars in the galaxy.”

    “The Mechanoids came from this system?” Alexander asked and looked at the blueprint. “What is Vania?”

    The blueprint spoke as it showed the planet, “Vania is the third planet from the Sora star at the distance of 95,560,000 miles (153,789,000 km). Its atmosphere contains 80.1% nitrogen 19.0% oxygen 0.5% argon, and 0.4% trace gasses. It is the only planet known to have oceans and land for life to flourish. It is home to an intelligent race called Sagans.”

    “Sagans?” Alexander asked himself thinking they were Mechanoids. “Alpha, what section of this library we are on?”

    Alpha said, “We are at the science floor. The blueprints are arranged alphabetically and numerically.”

    The blueprint displayed a message below the holographic planet. It read, “If you are interested, you could head to the virtual theater just at the first floor of the library.”

    “What is that?” Alexander asked.

    Alpha said, “It is probably where they would play us one of these blueprints like a movie.”

    Alexander looked over the blueprints. “If we are going to that theater, we should get blueprints about the Garden of Eden, the Mechanoids, and the Sagans. I really never heard of those people before. What are they?”

    He found specific blueprints from the wall. The group head to the end of the walkway and it lowered itself to the next floor. There was a button to push which floor to go to. He chose the bottom floor and it finally took them there.

    There was an open door with closed curtains and they walked in. The theater was in a shape of a dome with no seats. A cylindrical object was centered at the room. Alexander walked up to it and there was a slot at the side. He knew there was where he had to put the blueprint there.

    He put it in the slot and the door sealed shut behind them. They looked around as they found themselves surrounded by stars.  The cylindrical object disappeared. A woman with a bubble body filled with galaxies appeared before them.

    She spoke, “Greetings, welcome to the library’s virtual theater. I am Eve, your virtual intelligent. You have chosen to learn about the Sagans. What questions do you have?”

    Alexander hesitated and stepped toward the V.I. “What are the Sagans?”

    The theater changed from a series of stars to grassland. Green people with tentacles like hair chasing a dragon-like creature with rabbit ears. Eve explained. “As planet Vania was formed and life flourished 12 billion years ago, the Sagans evolved to be the first intelligent beings. They were able to make and use tools. With tools, they were able to hunt and build things. With these abilities, they moved across the planet. This lead to the rise of harvesting and settling, which also lead to acquiring new resources such as metal, food, water, minerals, and rocks. Acquiring these resources led increased their use of tools and homes. They started as nomads, then they worked their way from village, to town, and to cities.”

    Alexander asked. “Where are they now?”

    Eve changed the scene to power plants spewing toxic gasses into the atmosphere. She continued. “The Sagans increased their use of technology and resources for thousands of years. Though they didn’t know what were the consequences overusing resources, which destroyed the planet’s ecosystem. They destroyed all the trees and dug up all the resources from the crust. The air and water were polluted and all the animals and plants died out.”

    The scene changed again showing the Mechanoids being built by the Sagans. She conintued, “The Sagans created machines known as the Mechanoids to serve as laborers to rebuild ecosystems and grow more resources. But the process took too long to keep the Sagans alive. As the food and water were gone, the Sagans died out living the Mechanoids behind.”

    “That is awful,” said Vyla.

    “The Humans almost followed that same fate hundreds of years ago,” said Yuya.

    “Thankfully we resolved it,” said Aoife.

    “But the Sagans didn’t,” said David.

    Then next scene showed Mechanoids going into the space. “With everything on the surface gone, the Mechanoids flew into Space to collect more resources. There were no other stars around that time as the galaxy was still young. So they recycled all the technology the Sagans left behind to create the Garden of Eden.”

    The next scene was the Mechanoids building the Garden of Eden. “The Garden of Eden was used energy from the super blackholes to gain power and energy for the Garden of Eden. It started out as a library where they stored all the Sagan’s information. Then they expanded it into a laboratory in hopes of rebuilding life and resurrecting their creators.”

    The scene zoomed in to a pyramid structure with three pointy antennas releasing sparks. “The Garden of Eden was built with carbon nanotubes bucky fibres as it was used to for terraformation. They harvested matter from the gravitation of super blackholes. The matter is pulled into the super blackholes and the Garden of Eden captures it. This matter gets collected into this structure called the Accretionator.”

    This device was demonstrated to show how they created the planets in the Milky Way. “The Accretionator was built to create planets to be filled with life. First, it used the super blackholes to open a rift in space and time to another region in the galaxy. Once the rift was opened, they use the matter collected and create the planets. They continued to modify each one until they were habitable for life to emerge and evolve.”

    “A device used to create planets?” Vyla asked.

    “That is what Eve said,” said Alexander.

    David said, “It wouldn’t make sense for the Spacers and Helbots to travel to the Garden of Eden to create planets.”

    Alexander asked, “What would happen if the Accretionator is used on a planet already made?”

    Eve explained with a holographic demonstration. “The Accretionator use on a planet already created would be chaotic. The matter collected by the super blackholes would destroy the planet and send an explosion across 2 light years.”

    The Accretionator fired at a planet and it exploded. The explosion spewed across most of the cluster. Alexander stood frozen and his group looked at each as they were surprised. He thought, this all makes sense now.

    “What is it?” David asked Alex.

    Alexander said in an angry tone. “Cahan came to the Garden of Eden to find this Accretionator. He’s going to use it as a weapon.”

    “This is bad news,” said Howie.

    Alexander said, “If they have full access to the Accretionator, then they’ll use it against use and wipe out everything. We have to know how that thing would be used.”

    Eve said. “The Accretionator cannot be used unless the codex is retrieved and inserted into the control room. Once the codex is in place, the user would have full access to the Accretionator.”

    “Where is it?” Alexander asked.

    “It is located at the very center of the Garden of Eden,” said Eve. “The codex is just at the tenth floor of the library.”

    “What are we going to do now?” Aoife asked.

    Alexander pulled the blueprint out and Eve disappeared. Then he said, “We have to retrieve the codex whatever it looks like. Then we find a way to get out of the library before the Helbots do. If we get out of here, we have to get back to the ship.”

    Yuya said, “We don’t have a way to make contact with the Republic or anywhere else.”

    Moses suggested, “We could use the Helbots communication rays to make contact with everyone and give our coordinates.”

    “That would attract more Helbots to attack us,” said Vyla.

    “They don’t know where our ship is,” Alexander said and then snapped. “Goddammit, this is a trap! There’s too many of them!”

    Everyone fell silent as Alexander felt overwhelmed, not knowing what to do. Cahan had his Spacers and Helbots trapped them in the library. Most of the empire was at the Garden of Eden. His team was surrounded. Cahan would kill them all and take the codex to activate the Accretionator. This mission was suicidal.
Hybrid 3, Chapter 33: Virtual Theater
Alexander and his team gets trapped inside the library. They find out that the Mechanoids were created by a race called the Sagans billions of years ago. Sagans died out after they wasted all their resources leaving the Mechanoids behind. They flew into space and created the Garden of Eden to create planets and rebuild life in hopes of bringing back what they lost. Cahan and the Helbots are going to use the Garden of Eden as a weapon to wipe out all the planets in the galaxy. Alexander is now in the no win situation.


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Chapter 12: Hybrid 3, Chapter 12: Unexpected Reunion
Chapter 13: Hybrid 3, Chapter 13: Reconnect?
Chapter 14: Hybrid 3, Chapter 14: Chase in the Newborn Star
Chapter 15: Hybrid 3, Chapter 15: A Risky Deal
Chapter 16: Hybrid 3, Chapter 16: Hell
Chapter 17: Hybrid 3, Chapter 17: Note from Chuck
Chapter 18: Hybrid 3, Chapter 18: Resistance Strike
Chapter 19: Hybrid 3, Chapter 19: Old Friends, New Enemies
Chapter 20: Hybrid 3, Chapter 20: Talking Politics
Chapter 21: Hybrid 3, Chapter 21: Moses
Chapter 22: Hybrid 3, Chapter 22: Trusting a Machine
Chapter 23: Hybrid 3, Chapter 23: Home Sweet Home?
Chapter 24: Hybrid 3, Chapter 24: Chan's Anatomy
Chapter 25: Hybrid 3, Chapter 25: Back to the Law
Chapter 26: Hybrid 3, Chapter 26: His Father's Fault
Chapter 27: Hybrid 3, Chapter 27: Bleeding Out
Chapter 28: Hybrid 3, Chapter 28: Awake and Alive
Chapter 29: Hybrid 3, Chapter 29: The Garden's Gate
Chapter 30: Hybrid 3, Chapter 30: A Night to Remember
Chapter 31: Hybrid 3, Chapter 31: The Garden of Eden
Chapter 32: Hybrid 3, Chapter 32: The Hunger Games
Chapter 33: Reading
Chapter 34: Coming Soon
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Jesus Fucking Christ!!!

Fifty Shades of Grey is about a billionaire who abuses and rapes a young woman. That is what it really is. Why the fuck people are into this shit? Don't they know it is wrong?!

Well this Twilight fan girl, NuttyMadam just made a video bashing haters for Fifty Shades of Grey. She loves Fifty Shades of Grey because it is a Twilight story. Good god!


I just made a comment to her video on why Fifty Shades of Grey. Here is my comment, "It does not matter if it is fiction or not, what matters is that 50 shades of grey is a abusive story. It had damaged people's lives."

That was my comment on her video. Then she responded to me saying this, "It hasn't damaged anyones lives.....it's a fucking book. How has it damaged anyones life? Explain this to me."

Here is the conversation,

Me: It does not matter if it is fiction or not, what matters is that 50 shades of grey is a abusive story. It had damaged people's lives.

NuttyMadam: It hasn't damaged anyones lives.....it's a fucking book. How has it damaged anyones life? Explain this to me.

Me: He broke into her apartment to have sex with, what do you call that? Fifty Shades of Grey has been known to promote abuse and rape. Christian Grey stalks her on the internet. He watches her sleep. He makes her do what he wants even if it is wrong. He shuts her up and scares her. He beats and rapes her all the time. He makes her feel bad about herself. Where the hell is Bill Cosby when you need him? I am not saying this to be mean, I am saying that this is not ok.

There is an article I read online and I quote, "Following the wild success of E.L. James’ erotica series “Fifty Shades of Grey,” one study is now reporting that readers of the best-selling romance novels are more likely to have abusive partners. Out of 655 women ages 18 to 24 polled, 25 percent of those who admitted to reading James’ “Fifty Shades of Grey” were found more likely to have engaged in an abusive relationship, a study published Thursday in the Journal of Women’s Health."

This link to this article is right here if you are interested in reading it. www.ibtimes.com/fifty-shades-a…

What do you call when Edward watches Bella sleeping?

Sayitright90:Google is a useful tool. There have been several cases of murder with people attempting this 50 Shades of Gray shit. Instead of throwing ableist terms around and throwing a tantrum sit down and take time to educate yourself on what this book/movie demonstrates. I don't care if people see it. What's important is that you can realize how abusive it is.

Me:
 
Well said Sayitright90, well said. Anastasia Steele is the same character as Bella. She is clumsy, bits her lips a lot, not feeling confident, and acts boring. Christian Grey is Edward Cullen, except he physically and emotionally abusive to Ana. He controls her, stalks her, hits her a lot, yells and insults, and stares at her. He makes her signed a contract and she loses her virginity to him after. He had a bad childhood and uses sex to control himself. Jamie Dornan, why the fuck did he accept the role of this creep?! He deserves to be fired and kicked out of Hollywood. Jamie Dornan is as bad of Hayden Christensen and Robert Pattinson combined!

This is considered romance? There is no fucking chemistry in this abusive relationship! She lets him control and beat. Sometimes she does not like it but they do it anyway because he is a dominant. This movie and book romanticizes a abuser and rapist, where is Bill Cosby when you need him?

Do you want to know what Romance is?

Princess Bride

Silver Linings Playbook

10 Things I hate about you

Ever After

Dirty Dancing

Titanic

Any Disney movie has romance in it!

Those have deep romance in them! Fifty Shades of Grey and Twilight do not!

NuttyMadam: He never raped her, he tried to scare her off multiple times, he tried to get her to use a safeword, he tried to cut her out of his life and then when he couldn't, he went to therapy and worked on himself to be better for her. Stop trying to make it seem worse than it is. You're failing.

Me: Christian Grey broke into her apartment, what do you call that? Please answer this question!

NuttyMadam: He was welcome...she consentually had sex with him. if he wasn't welcome, he would have left. It wasn't breaking in, it was being there for her. Idiot.

Wow that was fucking on called for!. I was trying to explain why Fifty Shades of Grey is bad for women and she thinks I attacked her. Which I fucking did not! He was welcome to her apartment, Yeah Right! She is so stupid and does not listen to other people. I was trying to help her figure out what was wrong with this book and movie and refuse to listen. Reminds you of anything like how she bashed haters for not liking the Breaking Dawn book. Remember, AMAZING BOOOOOOKKKKK. No, it is not!

Then this other youtuber, who I can't say her name said this, "I'm not being offensive, I'm just disagreeing with you completely. I'm sure if I looked I could find several videos in which you say that Twilight has shaped who you are as a person, that it's become part of you after having read the books and watched the movies for so long, again not quoting you but you have said similar things because I've watched you ever since your first twilight trailer reaction, which I thought and still think are hilarious! You seem like a lovely person, but I can't look past this. Fictional works can affect people. Full stop, end of story. We wouldn't love them as much as we do if they didn't. Having a manipulative and abusive relationship in a work of fiction is extremely damaging to everyone who reads/watches it. If you can't accept what I'm saying, please look at this blog:

50shadesofabuse.wordpress.com/…

This blogger read the books in detail and dressed them down, and highlighted all the issues with it. You don't even have to read the full articles on each chapter, just have a look at the intro list. I hate that there are young girls that are reading and watching this series and seeing Mr Grey as the perfect man. Quite frankly it's sick."

Then NuttyMadam commented on her comment, "You couldn't be more wrong, but you're entitled to think what you want to think. There are works of fiction about rape, abuse, murder etc and people don't read them and then aspire to be like the characters in them. You're talking shit."

Then I said, "Christian Grey is basically Bill Cosby."

And another Twilight youtuber, MsRainbow Brite said this to me, "Not even remotely accurate. Have you even bothered to read the books?"

Me:  Yes! (I actually read that, 50shadesofabuse.wordpress.com/…"

MsRainbow Brite: so then how did you come to the conclusion that Christian is anything like Bill Cosby? 

Me: Well Christian Grey stalks, scares, beats, and rapes Anna!

MsRainbow Brite: I don't remember him raping her, where was that in the book? 

Me to NuttyMadam: Fifty Shades of Grey,’ I’m sorry, is about a very violent, abusive relationship. She falls in love with this guy and he beats the shit out of her and calling it romance. What message are we sending to young people? That is not going to help this world evolve.

Me to MsRainbow Brite: 50shadesofabuse.wordpress.com/…

MsRainbow Brite: so... you haven't read the books? why did you say you have? 

Me: The point is that 50 Shades of Grey is a rapy and abuse story. I dont need to read the book. I read this analysis online and I am good to know what is about. END OF STORY!!! Do you understand NuttyMadam!?

MsRainbow Brite: Why did you say you read the books?... fuck what a loser. You can call it abuse... but its consensual. read the books before you judge something clearly you have no idea about

Me: NuttyMadam can't see the difference between right and wrong in both Twilight and Fifty Shades of Grey. Imagine Shailene Woodley seeing this video.
Reply

MsRainbow Brite: Why would anyone care if Woodley saw this video? 

MsRainbow Brite: I think Woodley would say anything for someone to pay attention to her 

I basically made her shut the fuck up. There is no point in me saying this over and over again if they are not going to listen.

That battle is not over. Another Youtuber named somewhatsecret said this, ""It's not dangerous, it's a film!" Exhibit fucking A. If you don't grasp how much power and influence the film industry and media of ANY kind has in our country and therefore in others then I can't even begin to outline the amount of ignorance in this statement. It's a subconscious process. If you don't stop and become self aware about the media you consume and what it could be influencing you to do then you're going to end up being the FIRST target. Don't become complacent. What you consume affects you. Case. Closed."

Then NuttyMadam said, "Case not closed. If you think you can just stop the conversation, on the comment section of my video...think again. People do take inspiration and influence from media, yes, BUT we still have a part of our brains that tells us not to do stupid shit that will get us hurt. I read the books, and i loved them. Reading them hasn not made me want to find a partner to embark into a BDSM relationship. If i did, i'd do lots of research. Anyone who sees this film.reads these books, and goes out to try to find an emotionally crippled, narcissistic, traumatised billionaire...needs a fucking slap."

OK this makes me so mad that I copied a quote from Shailene Woodley and edited it to make sure it is about Fifty Shades of Grey instead of Twilight. Shailene said, " Twilight,’ I’m sorry, is about a very unhealthy, toxic relationship. She falls in love with this guy and the second he leaves her, her life is over and she’s going to kill herself! What message are we sending to young people? That is not going to help this world evolve."

Then I edited to make it about Fifty Shades of Grey, I wrote, "Fifty Shades of Grey,’ I’m sorry, is about a very violent, abusive relationship. She falls in love with this guy and he beats the shit out of her and calling it romance. What message are we sending to young people? That is not going to help this world evolve." Then added, "Where is Bill Cosby when you need him?"

Then NuttyMadam said, "^^ i see you trollin....you failin....nobody care what you are saying...."

Then a youtuber named BenshortsPuto said, "And this is why you will be alone for the rest of your life, the only action you will get is with your own fingers or a dildo. Fat ass ugly bitch"

I comment, "There is no way of telling her what is wrong about this movie. She is not thinking right!"

NuttyMadam then said, "Ahhh it's nice to see the trolls have arrived. Please make yourself at home! Enjoy your stay and remember to repress any and all genuine emotions in order to continuously hide from your sad little life. Oh and please subscribe. Please. I need your approval. So much."

God help me! Fifty Shades of Grey is about Rape and Abuse turned into romance. That is fucked up and everyone denies it! NuttyMadam has to know the difference between this shit and real life! FiftY Shades of Grey is the worst thing Humanity created!

THIS SHIT IS RIDICULOUS TO ME!!!

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Chapter 23:
Training Season

June 23 2350

    Alexander walked through an icy tundra as the winds howled around him. Wearing only a thin jacket and shivering, he hunched over and crossed his arms. Ice was forming on the sleeves of his jacket. His feet trudged through the ice and snow, moving slower with each aching step.

     As he walked through this icy hell, he heard the voice of Seiton again behind him. Seiton said to him, "You can't run from me no matter where you go."

     Alexander then ran through the snow ignoring the cold temperatures. He couldn't see the demon anywhere, but he knew that he was there to hunt him down.

     "Stop running from me!" Seiton shouted at him. "I told you not to run!"

     Alexander then saw a rocky mountain with a light on top shining through the snowy storm. He believed that it was an exit to get away from the demon. He sprinted across the snow and leaped onto the first level of the mountain. He climbed over rock walls and leaped to each level of the mountain as the demon chased him.

     "You are weak! You can't outrun me!" Seiton shouted angrily.

     But Alexander climbed, hoping that shining glow was an exit. The closer he was to the light, the more he felt he would escape from the demon. Then he saw a row of stairs that led to the strange light. As soon as he got to the stairs, he leaped over the steps as if he was racing in the Olympics. The light got brighter as he got closer to the light. He barely kept his eyes open as he got to the light.

     Then a strange young woman appeared from the light and stepped toward Alexander. She wore a golden dress, her eyes were blue, and her hair was black. As soon as he saw the woman, he knew who it was. It was his mother, Helen. He was very happy to see his mother again. She looked very beautiful to him. Now that his mother was here, she could protect him from Seiton.

     "Mother!" Alexander cried to his mother. "Save me! Please!"

     Helen smiled and said, "Don't be afraid" and she disappeared. Then a golden sword appeared in the snow. There were various gems on the handle of the sword and the shiny blade was made of titanium. His mother had given him a sword to fight off the demon.

     "Your mother is a fool!" Seiton shouted. "She can never protect you! You don't have any hope!"

     Alexander picked up the sword and his arm magically became armored. He turned around and saw the eyes of Seiton in a thick cloud of black smoke. The smoke slowly morphed into Seiton's true Titan form. As soon as he showed his true form, he laughed at Alexander.

     "You think you can handle me," he laughed. "Well, if that is how you want to die, let it be!"

     Seiton charged with claws and teeth sticking out. Alexander raised his sword and charged as well. Fire circled around them forming his own arena. The demon magically summoned his own sword and about to strike him. As their swords clashed, he woke up.

     He woke up as a roar of thunder came from outside early in the morning. It was the raining season in Purlife again. Hobbes came into his room and jumped onto the bed. He purred and snuggled as he got on the bed.

     "Morning boy," Alexander said as he petted his pet jaguar. "It is going to be a wet day."

     As he petted Hobbes, he thought about that dream he just had. This time, his mother was involved and gave him a weapon to fight. At first the dream started as horrifying and then the battle was about to become epic. He didn't know if he was going to win that fight or not. He didn't know how to fight someone. He also remembered the time where Hortor and his gang ripped his skin open and [he] wasn't able to fight back. No one ever taught him how to fight.

     He got up from his bed, got dressed, and headed to the kitchen. When he got to the kitchen, Alice made oatmeal with blueberries freshly picked from their garden.

     She looked up, smiled. "Morning Alex."

     "Morning Alice," said Alexander. "That oatmeal looks really good."

     "I hope you like it," she said. "Did you sleep well?"

     "Kind of, but I had another dream with Seiton and this time my mother was in it too," said Alexander.

     "What did your mother do?" she asked as the name Seiton and Alexander's mother got her attention.

     Alexander started, "First, Seiton was chasing me in an arctic wasteland and I climbed all the way to the top of a mountain. On the top of the mountain was a bright glowing light. I got to the light and it turned out to be my mother. She disappeared and left me a golden sword to fight him. Seiton got his sword out and we were about to have a battle. But then my dream ended."

     "I hope you were going to win," she said. "There is something we must discuss."

    "Ok, what is it?" he asked.

     Alice cleared her throat as she began to explain. "When I first met you, you were helpless. As you discovered that you're a hybrid of the Spacers, you felt lonely and vulnerable. I know that Seiton guy wants to come after you. But I am not going to let that happen. You are still helpless, but not forever."

    "What are you planning?" Alexander asked as he wasn't sure what she was up to.

    "Alex, I'm going to train you," she stated. "You must learn how you can defend yourself. Seiton and the Helbots would come after you. So you have to be ready to fight. I can't let you be all helpless. Please let me do this."

    Alexander took a few moments to think as he hesitated. He had ran away from the Helbots when they came to his homeworld. Hortor's bullies beaten him as he couldn't fight. Nightmares of Seiton kept happening as he tried to sleep. Alice was right, he thought. He was defenseless.

    She added. "I learned many fighting styles when I served in the military and I still practiced these moves," she added.

    "What do you suppose we do?" he asked.

    "First you must finish your breakfast," she said. "Then we'll go outside to begin your training."

    He looked through the window as rain poured out. "In the rain?"

    She nodded. "In the rain."

    After Alexander finished eating his oatmeal, he went back into his room and put on his workout clothes. When he was ready, they head out to the back door. Rain showered over him as they walked to an open yard. They got to the middle of the yard and his clothes were already sticking to him.

     Alice stood facing him as they begin. "Alright Alex, I want you to get into a riding stance. You widen your legs, crunch down into a perpendicular angle, and keep your back straight."

     He began to go into this stance. As he lowered his hip, he stopped as his legs stretched and locked in place. She said, "Go lower."

    He said as he struggled to hold. "This is how low I can get."

    "You can still go lower," she said. "Make sure your butt is sticking, your knees level to your toes, and your back straight."

    He listened and straighten his back. As soon as he did it, he fell onto the soaking grass. as if he had done it before. She said, "Normally, all beginners fall when doing a stance for the first time. As you practice, you'll get better. Now do ten pushups."

     After he did his pushups, he got back on the stance. She continued, "Alright then. When you make a fist, keep your thumbs at the side of your hands. If you were going to punch someone with your thumb at the front of your hand, they would be broken off." He understood that and moved his thumbs at the side of his hands.

     "Excellent. As you throw a punch, you extend it to as far as it can go to. Don't throw it far like you are trying to reach for it."

    Alice picked up a stop sign and stuck it into the ground in front of him so he could use it as a target practice. Alexander extended one arm at a time as he threw punches at the stop sign without hitting it. At first he was slow with the punches, but ten minute later he threw them so fast that his arms started hurting. She believed that it wouldn't take long for him to know all of the moves for self-defense.

     After she taught him some basic punches, she then had him throw punches while blocking at the same. "To block the opponent's punches, you curl your arms outward to have the punches be bounced off. Or if the opponent was going to strike you from high above, you just block with the lower parts of your arms."

     Alice threw a punch at Alexander, he curled his arm too early and she hit his face. He fell to ground and cried in pain. She pulled him back up and looked to make sure she didn't leave any bruises.

    "Ok, I'm sorry. Now you must know when to block. I'll go slow," she said. She inched her punch towards him.

    "Block," she said as she got halfway to him. He curled his arm and knocked the punch out of the way. "Excellent, we're going to continue to do this for five minutes."

    Alexander eyed on her punches as he practiced his blocking. As he blocked, Alice increased her speed. She went faster with her strikes and he started having problem keeping an eye on some of them. Then she punched him twice and he was flipped to the ground. He held his nose firmly as he shouted. "My nose!"

    Alice got him back up and his nose was bleeding. "Let's get you a tissue and hold on your nose until it stops."

    Alexander grabbed the tissue and held it in his nose. "Wow, three punches at the same spot."

    "We'll go easy until your nose is better," said Alice. "When you are better, you'll be spending all afternoon practicing your punches and blocks."

    The next day, they got back to the yard to do more training.

     So far he had mastered punching and blocking. Next she taught him stances to be in a fight. Some of the stances of her fighting techniques were going to the opponent, retreating from the opponent, getting out of the way, and some twists and turns.

     "You are doing great!" Alice was pleased. "Next I am going to show you different kinds of kicks. The first types of kicks we are going to do are toe kicks where you kick and your toes are extended to the very tip of your feet."

     They both got into a stance where they were going to do some kicks. She had him do some toe kicks to the ankle, the stomach, wrists, elbow, and to the head. He understood how to do toe kicks to different parts of the body of the opponent and how very effective they were. Then they did heel kicks to the legs, stomach, and the chest. He wobbled to the sides as he kicked and then fell. But he got back up and practiced more toe kicks.

     "That's a good start, now let's try sidekicks. Here is what you do, you lean to the left side of your body and use your right leg to kick at the right side. If you practice long enough, you would kick something that is above five feet from your head."

     He leaned to the left side of his body, picked up his right leg, and kicked to the right side. First his side kick was a little bit low. He tried to go higher, but lost his balance. She had him do pushups every time he fell.

     "Ok then! Now we are going to do crescent kicks. You start out having your leg on the ground. When you swing your leg to left, bend your knee on the other leg you so you can lift your kicking leg high enough so it goes above your head."

     He watched her do a crescent kick and then he lifted his left leg and swung it to the right. Then he spun around like a top and splashed into a puddle of mud. Scraping the mud off his face and shirt, he got some in his mouth and spat it out. Then had to get back to the ground to do more pushups.  

     She said. "I have you practice your kicks all afternoon. Tomorrow I will teach you how to grab in different ways. At the end of the day, I want you to stretch out your muscles so they will recover."

     He nodded and spent about half an hour stretching each part of his body. After that he felt more energetic than before. Later that evening, he practiced the moves he learned while Alice was making dinner. Alpha came to the yard and started talking to him.

     "Alexander, Alice was very impressed that you just mastered the basic moves of hand combat," Alpha was happy.

     "Thanks," he smiled. "It's only the beginning."

     "Pretty soon, you will be able to fight the Helbots," said Alpha.

     Alexander stopped doing crescent kicks to take a breath. "They better not come here soon. Right?"

     "I don't know, but you need to keep practicing. You are getting better at this."

     "Thanks," said Alexander as he continued to do more kicks.

     The next day, Alice taught him how to fight with various grab techniques. They returned to the open yard where they were before. It was breezy, but it would help them feel cool from the hot sun of Virgil. He just finished his warm ups and was ready for his lesson.

     "Alright, grabs are useful in fighting while the opponent was going to strike you with a punch or kick," Alice instructed him. "As you grab, you can pull the opponent towards or away from you."

     Alice showed him how to grab by demonstrating on her own, she had him attack her to see how it was done, and then he did it. She showed him the basic block he should use if someone were to kick him. Then she twisted her block into a grab and crouched down. He went to kick her, but she grabbed the kick and forced him down into the ground. He then got up and did the same technique she did.

     Then she had him review the moves he remembered from the first day. He got into perfect fighting stanches and preformed his punches, grabs, blocks, and kicks at the same time. She lunged at him and threw a couple punches at him. He blocked them, then she knocked him down with a crescent kick. She helped him up and attacked him again. He retreated as she got closer to him. He blocked and threw a kick. But she caught the kick in the air and threw him down. Feeling frustrated, he lunged at her and randomly threw punches at her. She blocked them away and thrust kick his stomach.

    Lying on the ground, Alexander shouted. "This is so hard!"

    Alice said. "Alex, you are frustrated. You need to learn how to be patient and control your moves. We have all summer to do this. Don't beat yourself down yet. You'll get better. Now please do fifty pushups for me."

     After doing more pushups, Alexander felt very tired for this training. He felt as if this was going nowhere for him. He looked up in the sky thinking Seiton was watching him from above. Panicked, he continued to practice hoping to get better.

     Days passed as he learned and practiced his fighting moves. As he was mastered every move, Alice then taught him how to use martial art weapons. She took out a couple of wooden staff and handled one to him.

     "First part of the lesson," said Alice with a joke. "Speak softly and carry a big stick; you will go far."

     "Theodore Roosevelt said that," said Alexander.

     "I was kidding in a way," she smiled. "I will show you how to fight with a staff. You can block the opponent's strikes at various directions with the staff."

     She held the staff with both hands near both ends. She raised her staff in the air as a way of blocking a strike from above. Then she lowered her staff to her knees, which was a way of blocking a strike coming from below. She turned it to the left side of her body to a block a strike that was coming to her sides. He slowly followed every move she made with the staff and understood how to block and strike.

     Then they had a staff sparring match between each other. She threw her strike from above and he blocked it. Then he changed the block to a strike to the side. His change from a block to a strike caused her to be knocked down. She got back up and swung her staff from below and he tripped. His punishment for his defeat was sixty pushups.

     Next day in the afternoon, she taught him how to fence. They got into their fencing suits and she showed him how to use a fencing foil. He paid attention to every move she made as a perfect way to learn. He practiced very well with the fence and they had a fencing match. He used the blocks and strikes he learned as he fenced against her. He blocks and strikes her at a fast pace and received more point on the score broad.

     As he stabbed her with the sword for the first time in the match, Alice felt very exhausted and relieved as they spar against each other for about an hour. She took a while to catch her breath and grab a long drink of water.

     "Your moves have improved very well!" Alice patted while drinking her water at the same time.

     "Thanks Alice," he smiled and bowed to his teacher before heading back to the house.

     "Before dinner is served, I want you to spend an hour running fast on the treadmill," she said. "After that, continue practicing your moves."

     "Alright then," he nodded.

     As she rested on the bench in the yard, she was very happy that Alexander learned and mastered all of the fighting moves she taught him. Soon everyone would witness the greatest warrior ever existed. She felt much better about his future because he was preparing. This was very good for them.

     For a week, she had him lifted weights in the basement. Before he worked out, he always stretched his muscles to warm up. At times he goes running through the jungle all the way to the beach and back.

    She dragged an empty metal barrel and hung it from a tree branch. Alexander looked confused as he wondered what she was doing. He asked, "What are you doing?"

    She finished tying the rope. "I am going to have you punch this barrel many times. It'll hurt. But the more you do this, the more stronger you become."

    Alexander stood in front of the barrel and got into his fighting stance. He punched against the metal barrel and clutched his hand. His hand felt numb and it hurt.
   
    "Hit the barrel again," she said.

    He gulped and hit it again. "Ow!"

    His other hand felt numb. He shook his hands and continued to hit the barrel. He kept hitting until the skin was scrapped off his hands. Blood began dripping off his fingers.

    "That would be enough punching that barrel for today," she said. "Please do pushups."

     One week later, Alice taught him how to fight in Judo style. She showed him how to grab, knock down, trip, and tackle an opponent. First, she did the moves on her own while he was watching. Then she had him tackle her and demonstrated how her moves were done. And then she attacked him and he did the same move as she did. They did this way for each fighting move so that he could fully master it.

     As she showed him all the moves of Judo moves, they had a Judo match. She had him attack her and she grabbed a hold of arms. Then he twisted his body to break free, but then she lifted him into the air and threw him into the ground.

    At the next sparring match, she got on top of him pinning hard into ground not letting him go anywhere. He grabbed her shoulders, flipped her over, and pinned her down as well. She couldn't resist or break free from him and so he won the match. After a series of Judo matches, he was able to win at the last round.

     The next day, she had Alexander wake up early in the morning to go hiking up a mountain wearing weights around his ankles and waists. He found it a very difficult getting to the top. His muscles tightened with the weights as he got to each foot up the mountain. There were times he had to climb on a rock wall with the weights on his back. When he got to the top of the mountain, he ran all the way down still with the weights on.

    When he got home, he fell to a bench and stretched out his legs. His body had been aching for weeks of training. This training had been rough, but it was worth it.

    "Good, you're home," said Alice as she stepped out of the house. "Now I want you to punch more on the barrel and do a hundred pushups after."

    Alexander nodded and walked to the barrel. He took a few deep breathes and got into his stance. He punched against the metal with ease. Shifting his positions around, he bend the sides of the barrel. He can feel his fingers breaking and more skin scraping off during his punches. But he couldn't stop until Alice said so.

     The next day, she had him swim across the bay until he was very tired. He started swimming at around eight in the morning and didn't stop swimming until it was about six in the evening. He swam three thousand five hundred feet across the water from one point to the other.

    He ran back home and practiced his fighting moves. Then he punched the barrel more. The barrel bent even more as he punched. The pain didn't matter to him. He kept saying in his head, if I want to succeed, I have to go through this.

    On the last punch, the barrel fell off from the branch. He stomped on the barrel and crushed it down like a soda can. He repeatedly crushed it down until it was as flat as a pancake.

    As he took a moment to relax, Alice stood behind him with her mouth open. She was shocked to see that Alexander had become very strong. She shouted, "Alex, that was amazing!"

    He turned around. "This training is working!"

    She said, "There is more to come. Keep at this."

     As the season progresses, he started out learning every basic fighting moves and progresses to advanced moves. He started out as a newbie and worked his way into a black belt warrior. He started out doing small things to doing that was huge and hard. He never felt proud of himself more than ever. This was a great feeling to him. He really loved having her not only as a guardian, but also as his teacher.

    One afternoon, Alexander stepped outside and Alice stood in the middle of the yard holding a sword. He thought that they were going to spar with swords again. He went to go get himself and she shouted from the distance. "Don't pick up a sword!"

    Alexander called. "But you have one!"

    "I want to test you now," said Alice.

    Alexander stood in front of her. Alice got into her fighting stance as she swung her sword. "Alex, defend yourself!"

    Alice lunged at him. He dodged at an angle and grabbed her fighting arm. She pulled out her knife to stab him, but he caught it. He kicked the sword off her hand and twisted her other hand. She let go of the knife and he flipped her into the ground.

    She round out of the way and grabbed a staff with a long blade. He sprint at him as he grabbed her sword. She thrust the staff and he blocked it as he slid the blade to her. The blade sliced her thumb and she lets go of the staff.

    Then she kicked the sword off his hand and the two engaged in hand to hand combat. She threw a punch, he blocked it. Then he twisted her arm and threw her across the yard. She slowly got up and he stood in his fighting stance.

    Finally, she put her hands together as she was done sparring. He too put his hands together and they bowed to each other. "That would be all today Alex. Now do 150 pushups and continue practicing until dark."

     After a long day, he looked himself at the mirror and was amazed to find what he was looking at. His chest was cut and bulky along with his tight abdomen. His arms and legs were cut and bulky as well. He had a body of body an athlete and a body-builder. Not only he looked good in the inside, he also looked good on the outside.

     One day, they went to the garden for his training. She took out a huge towel and laid it on the ground surrounded by large beautiful flowers. She had him sat on the towel just as she was sitting down with her legs crossed.

     "This is new," said Alexander feeling a little bit odd.

     "Today on this training, we are going to meditate," said Alice. "Mediation is a special stress-reliever that has been used since the first civilizations emerged thousands of years ago. It is a great way to relax and feel good about yourself. Here is how it works, you close your eyes, and take deep breathes with your stomach. You breathe in with your nose and exhales from your mouth. Usually you would do this method with relaxing music."

     "Does it work?" he asked.

     "Every time," she smiled and got out a music player. "Before we begin, I want to ask you a few questions."

     "Sure, what is it?"

     "How do you feel right now?"

     "Right now, I feel stronger than I have before."

     "You're stronger. Now, what do you want to accomplish?"

     "I want to show everyone how good I am in things and help them. I really don't want to feel out of place. I feel that I could make a difference in everyone's life."

     "That sounds great! I believe what you have learned from school, me, your mother, and Alpha, you can make a difference. I am very proud of what you have received in this training I have been giving you all summer. I taught you all the moves I have learned and I want to keep practicing those. I want to use those responsively and help those that are in need."

     "I never forget everything since I was born, I will continue to practice and help people. I promise!"

     "Great! Lets mediate."

     Alice turned on the music player and soothing Indian music started playing. Alexander closed his eyes, inhaled air with his nose, and then exhaled from his mouth. The air he was inhaled made his stomach expand and then shrink as he exhaled. He was only paying attention to his breath and nothing else around him. As he continued to mediate, his muscles relaxed, his breathing slowed down, and his mind was totally blank. He never felt like this before, but he loved it.

     As the music stopped playing, Alice opened her eyes and said to him, "When you are ready, you can open your eyes."

     Alexander took a deep breath and slowly opened his eyes. He felt as though only a little time had gone by since they started, but really they had spent a couple hours meditating. He looked and smiled at Alice.

     "Thank you, Alice!" he smiled.

     "No, thank you," she smiled back. And they hugged. Alexander was very happy that he had another mother that was both his protector and mentor.

     Later that night, Alexander found himself back at the tundra from the last nightmare. He predicted that the demon would come from behind and stab him in the back. He was not armed, but Seiton would be. He looked around to see where the mountain with Helen was on top of it.

     "So you think you are strong," Seiton crept up behind him.

     Then Alexander saw the mountain on the other side of the frozen bay and ran for it. He didn't care how thick the ice was at the bay. All he cared about was getting to the top of the mountain and fight the demon.

     "Your blood shall be poured into the sea," said Seiton.

     Then ice that he was running across started to crack as Seiton got on it. Cracks in the ice spread rapidly as Seiton gained on him. The ice then broke apart and Alexander leaped on each island of ice just before they were dissolved. He didn't dare to look back or stop. He focused on which floating ice that was closest to him as he was running.

     "I will freeze your heart stone cold!" Seiton shouted. "You can't get up to the mountain!"

     "Say all you want, but I am not letting you kill me!" Alexander shouted back as he made it to the other side of the bay.

     He got to the base of the mountain and started to trot his way to the top. He could see the shining light on the top. Helen waited for him to come so she could help him. She would help him defeat the demon once and for all.

     "Stop running to the top and let me consume your heart!" Seiton ordered.

     "No!" Alexander shouted.

     "You damn boy never listen to me!" Seiton shouted angrily. "Get over here!"

     Alexander ran as fast as he could to the top of the mountain. When he got to the top, Helen waited. He was very grateful to get some aid from his mother. As he got closer to his mother, Helen smiled.

     "I am so proud of you," Helen smiled. "You are almost there."

     Helen disappeared leaving behind the sword from the last dream. Seiton rushed to him from behind and Alexander quickly grabbed the sword. Alexander was really ready to fight the demon that haunted his life. Seiton arrived on top of the mountain and revealed his Titan form.

     Fire spread around them forming an arena. Seiton magically took out his sword and laughed at him.

     "You really think you can fight against me?" Seiton laughed.

     "I have been training to fight all summer long!" he shouted. "I learned every move Alice taught me! I was untrained, but now I am a warrior."

     "You a warrior," Seiton laughed as he thought it was a joke. "Let's see about that."

     Seiton zoomed toward Alexander, but Alexander moved out of the way. Seiton swung his sword toward him and he blocked it from the side. As he blocked, he changed the block to a strike to the abdomen and sliced the demon's stomach.

     The demon cried in pain when Alexander sliced his stomach. "Damn you!"

     Seiton didn't care about the strike and charged at him. He kept swinging his sword in anger as he desperately wanted to kill the boy. Their swords kept clashing as the battle raged on. Alexander used all the moves he had learned from Alice as he fought Seiton. As their sword got stuck to each other, he swung it to Seiton's ankle and sliced the demon's ankle off.

     Seiton lost his balance as his ankle was cut off. He was still swinging his sword trying to reach Alexander's heart. Seiton started to lose his battle against a teenage boy.

     "No! That is impossible!" Seiton was surprised angrily. "I am supposed to kill you!"

     As Seiton couldn't believe that his ankle was off, he swung his sword against Seiton's sword and got it stuck again. The demon tried to keep in balance as he pushed his sword against Alexander's.

     "Drop your sword!" Seiton snarled.

     "NO!" Alexander roared in the demon's face. Then he got his sword to swing around Seiton's sword and cut his free hand off. Seiton screamed as he looked at his dismembered hand. While the demon distracted, he struck the demon's thumb which caused him to lose his sword. Alexander now had both swords.

     "No! No! No!" Seiton was horrified. "Get away from me!"

     "This is for the Spacers and my family!" Alexander shouted. With that said, he swung both swords at Seiton's neck and the demon's head was chopped off.

     As Alexander chopped off his head, the demon's body disintegrated into dust. The fire was blown out and the sky was cleared. The sun came out and melted all the ice and snow. All of the vegetation spread across the landscape as the demon was gone.

     Then Alexander woke up and found himself back in his room. He got out of his bed and wrote in his diary.

"Dear Diary:

     I had spent all summer learning how to fight by Alice. She taught me all kinds of fighting moves to defend myself and my loved ones. As I learned each move, I became stronger in the mind and body. With all the fighting moves Alice taught me, I am able to defend myself. I learned the basic moves of fighting. With my fast learning, I was able to learn all of the advance moves like a black belt master! I just had a dream where I was being chased by Seiton. But my mother appeared and gave me a sword. Seiton and I had a battle with each other. With all of the moves I learned, I was able to defeat him. Now he will never bother me in my dreams again! My mother was right; there is a warrior inside me!"
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Two months ago, I discovered a metal band called Amaranthe. They are a Swedish band that plays a mix of both metal, rock, and pop in each song. If you put those genres together, they sound great! Three singers, one of them is Elize Ryd. As soon as I started playing one of the songs on Youtube, I am automatically in love with her. Ok I admitted that I would not be in a relationship with her, I just love her music. If I do meet her in person, we would be friends. It is ok to have a crush with a singer, right?

Here are my reasons why Elize Ryd is my favorite singer:

1. She looks beautiful! In her concerts and videos, she looks stunning and very cute.


I have no idea what she is saying. I don't know Swedish, but I don't care! She is so beautiful!

2. She doesn't sing mainstream music! I listened to all of Amaranthe's albums and the songs are more meaningful than the songs being played in mainstream. The songs have more important messages. Mainstream music degrades women as sex objects, which disgusts me. Most people are into Katy Perry, Miley Cyrus, Nicki Minja, Sia, Lady Gaga, and Selena Gomez don't know there are better music out there. Since Elize Ryd does not perform mainstream music, she performs music that she writes and sings with meaning, true meaning!



3. She can dance! I have seen videos of her belly dancing during one of her concerts with Kamelot and Nightwish. I was blown away when I watched her dance with metal music playing. I didn't think that would work well mixing those two together, but it does. Great Job! She also dances in her music videos. The best part of her dancing is three things, no twerking (thank god), no stripping on stage, and she dances to the beat of the music. Two thumbs up!



4. She has performed with other artists! She has performed with other artists who are also not part of mainstream. She had performed songs with Nightwish and Kamelot while being one of the lead singers with Amaranthe.

5. She can actually sing! This is the number one reason why I love Elize Ryd. She can sing for real. She never lip syncs to any of the songs. If she does, she would do it when she is not performing on stage. Unlike Katy Perry and other mainstream singers, yeah I am looking at you guys. You know what I am talking about. Elize puts a lot of effort into her singing as she is with Amaranthe and other metal bands. She is a wonderful singer!


Those are my reasons why I love Elize Ryd. She is very talented, great dancer, very beautiful, does not perform mainstream music, and she can actually sing!

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Hey everyone! I am Brendan also known as Bclement117. I am a science fiction writer writing my own science fiction novel called Hybrid. I have been working on this story for such a long time. I have been bringing this story to life by writing it and posting these chapters to this website. After I finish writing this book, I will publish it and write more books in this series. This is for all you fans that love sci fi and fantasy. Please feel free to read the first chapters of my novel. I am open to any comments and suggestions! Enjoy!

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Jesus Fucking Christ!!!

Fifty Shades of Grey is about a billionaire who abuses and rapes a young woman. That is what it really is. Why the fuck people are into this shit? Don't they know it is wrong?!

Well this Twilight fan girl, NuttyMadam just made a video bashing haters for Fifty Shades of Grey. She loves Fifty Shades of Grey because it is a Twilight story. Good god!


I just made a comment to her video on why Fifty Shades of Grey. Here is my comment, "It does not matter if it is fiction or not, what matters is that 50 shades of grey is a abusive story. It had damaged people's lives."

That was my comment on her video. Then she responded to me saying this, "It hasn't damaged anyones lives.....it's a fucking book. How has it damaged anyones life? Explain this to me."

Here is the conversation,

Me: It does not matter if it is fiction or not, what matters is that 50 shades of grey is a abusive story. It had damaged people's lives.

NuttyMadam: It hasn't damaged anyones lives.....it's a fucking book. How has it damaged anyones life? Explain this to me.

Me: He broke into her apartment to have sex with, what do you call that? Fifty Shades of Grey has been known to promote abuse and rape. Christian Grey stalks her on the internet. He watches her sleep. He makes her do what he wants even if it is wrong. He shuts her up and scares her. He beats and rapes her all the time. He makes her feel bad about herself. Where the hell is Bill Cosby when you need him? I am not saying this to be mean, I am saying that this is not ok.

There is an article I read online and I quote, "Following the wild success of E.L. James’ erotica series “Fifty Shades of Grey,” one study is now reporting that readers of the best-selling romance novels are more likely to have abusive partners. Out of 655 women ages 18 to 24 polled, 25 percent of those who admitted to reading James’ “Fifty Shades of Grey” were found more likely to have engaged in an abusive relationship, a study published Thursday in the Journal of Women’s Health."

This link to this article is right here if you are interested in reading it. www.ibtimes.com/fifty-shades-a…

What do you call when Edward watches Bella sleeping?

Sayitright90:Google is a useful tool. There have been several cases of murder with people attempting this 50 Shades of Gray shit. Instead of throwing ableist terms around and throwing a tantrum sit down and take time to educate yourself on what this book/movie demonstrates. I don't care if people see it. What's important is that you can realize how abusive it is.

Me:
 
Well said Sayitright90, well said. Anastasia Steele is the same character as Bella. She is clumsy, bits her lips a lot, not feeling confident, and acts boring. Christian Grey is Edward Cullen, except he physically and emotionally abusive to Ana. He controls her, stalks her, hits her a lot, yells and insults, and stares at her. He makes her signed a contract and she loses her virginity to him after. He had a bad childhood and uses sex to control himself. Jamie Dornan, why the fuck did he accept the role of this creep?! He deserves to be fired and kicked out of Hollywood. Jamie Dornan is as bad of Hayden Christensen and Robert Pattinson combined!

This is considered romance? There is no fucking chemistry in this abusive relationship! She lets him control and beat. Sometimes she does not like it but they do it anyway because he is a dominant. This movie and book romanticizes a abuser and rapist, where is Bill Cosby when you need him?

Do you want to know what Romance is?

Princess Bride

Silver Linings Playbook

10 Things I hate about you

Ever After

Dirty Dancing

Titanic

Any Disney movie has romance in it!

Those have deep romance in them! Fifty Shades of Grey and Twilight do not!

NuttyMadam: He never raped her, he tried to scare her off multiple times, he tried to get her to use a safeword, he tried to cut her out of his life and then when he couldn't, he went to therapy and worked on himself to be better for her. Stop trying to make it seem worse than it is. You're failing.

Me: Christian Grey broke into her apartment, what do you call that? Please answer this question!

NuttyMadam: He was welcome...she consentually had sex with him. if he wasn't welcome, he would have left. It wasn't breaking in, it was being there for her. Idiot.

Wow that was fucking on called for!. I was trying to explain why Fifty Shades of Grey is bad for women and she thinks I attacked her. Which I fucking did not! He was welcome to her apartment, Yeah Right! She is so stupid and does not listen to other people. I was trying to help her figure out what was wrong with this book and movie and refuse to listen. Reminds you of anything like how she bashed haters for not liking the Breaking Dawn book. Remember, AMAZING BOOOOOOKKKKK. No, it is not!

Then this other youtuber, who I can't say her name said this, "I'm not being offensive, I'm just disagreeing with you completely. I'm sure if I looked I could find several videos in which you say that Twilight has shaped who you are as a person, that it's become part of you after having read the books and watched the movies for so long, again not quoting you but you have said similar things because I've watched you ever since your first twilight trailer reaction, which I thought and still think are hilarious! You seem like a lovely person, but I can't look past this. Fictional works can affect people. Full stop, end of story. We wouldn't love them as much as we do if they didn't. Having a manipulative and abusive relationship in a work of fiction is extremely damaging to everyone who reads/watches it. If you can't accept what I'm saying, please look at this blog:

50shadesofabuse.wordpress.com/…

This blogger read the books in detail and dressed them down, and highlighted all the issues with it. You don't even have to read the full articles on each chapter, just have a look at the intro list. I hate that there are young girls that are reading and watching this series and seeing Mr Grey as the perfect man. Quite frankly it's sick."

Then NuttyMadam commented on her comment, "You couldn't be more wrong, but you're entitled to think what you want to think. There are works of fiction about rape, abuse, murder etc and people don't read them and then aspire to be like the characters in them. You're talking shit."

Then I said, "Christian Grey is basically Bill Cosby."

And another Twilight youtuber, MsRainbow Brite said this to me, "Not even remotely accurate. Have you even bothered to read the books?"

Me:  Yes! (I actually read that, 50shadesofabuse.wordpress.com/…"

MsRainbow Brite: so then how did you come to the conclusion that Christian is anything like Bill Cosby? 

Me: Well Christian Grey stalks, scares, beats, and rapes Anna!

MsRainbow Brite: I don't remember him raping her, where was that in the book? 

Me to NuttyMadam: Fifty Shades of Grey,’ I’m sorry, is about a very violent, abusive relationship. She falls in love with this guy and he beats the shit out of her and calling it romance. What message are we sending to young people? That is not going to help this world evolve.

Me to MsRainbow Brite: 50shadesofabuse.wordpress.com/…

MsRainbow Brite: so... you haven't read the books? why did you say you have? 

Me: The point is that 50 Shades of Grey is a rapy and abuse story. I dont need to read the book. I read this analysis online and I am good to know what is about. END OF STORY!!! Do you understand NuttyMadam!?

MsRainbow Brite: Why did you say you read the books?... fuck what a loser. You can call it abuse... but its consensual. read the books before you judge something clearly you have no idea about

Me: NuttyMadam can't see the difference between right and wrong in both Twilight and Fifty Shades of Grey. Imagine Shailene Woodley seeing this video.
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MsRainbow Brite: Why would anyone care if Woodley saw this video? 

MsRainbow Brite: I think Woodley would say anything for someone to pay attention to her 

I basically made her shut the fuck up. There is no point in me saying this over and over again if they are not going to listen.

That battle is not over. Another Youtuber named somewhatsecret said this, ""It's not dangerous, it's a film!" Exhibit fucking A. If you don't grasp how much power and influence the film industry and media of ANY kind has in our country and therefore in others then I can't even begin to outline the amount of ignorance in this statement. It's a subconscious process. If you don't stop and become self aware about the media you consume and what it could be influencing you to do then you're going to end up being the FIRST target. Don't become complacent. What you consume affects you. Case. Closed."

Then NuttyMadam said, "Case not closed. If you think you can just stop the conversation, on the comment section of my video...think again. People do take inspiration and influence from media, yes, BUT we still have a part of our brains that tells us not to do stupid shit that will get us hurt. I read the books, and i loved them. Reading them hasn not made me want to find a partner to embark into a BDSM relationship. If i did, i'd do lots of research. Anyone who sees this film.reads these books, and goes out to try to find an emotionally crippled, narcissistic, traumatised billionaire...needs a fucking slap."

OK this makes me so mad that I copied a quote from Shailene Woodley and edited it to make sure it is about Fifty Shades of Grey instead of Twilight. Shailene said, " Twilight,’ I’m sorry, is about a very unhealthy, toxic relationship. She falls in love with this guy and the second he leaves her, her life is over and she’s going to kill herself! What message are we sending to young people? That is not going to help this world evolve."

Then I edited to make it about Fifty Shades of Grey, I wrote, "Fifty Shades of Grey,’ I’m sorry, is about a very violent, abusive relationship. She falls in love with this guy and he beats the shit out of her and calling it romance. What message are we sending to young people? That is not going to help this world evolve." Then added, "Where is Bill Cosby when you need him?"

Then NuttyMadam said, "^^ i see you trollin....you failin....nobody care what you are saying...."

Then a youtuber named BenshortsPuto said, "And this is why you will be alone for the rest of your life, the only action you will get is with your own fingers or a dildo. Fat ass ugly bitch"

I comment, "There is no way of telling her what is wrong about this movie. She is not thinking right!"

NuttyMadam then said, "Ahhh it's nice to see the trolls have arrived. Please make yourself at home! Enjoy your stay and remember to repress any and all genuine emotions in order to continuously hide from your sad little life. Oh and please subscribe. Please. I need your approval. So much."

God help me! Fifty Shades of Grey is about Rape and Abuse turned into romance. That is fucked up and everyone denies it! NuttyMadam has to know the difference between this shit and real life! FiftY Shades of Grey is the worst thing Humanity created!

THIS SHIT IS RIDICULOUS TO ME!!!

keelah se'lai

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