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Hey guys,

I am still editing my novels so I would be taking a long break from writing new chapters for my series. But for now, I want to write a fanfiction for Hell's Kitchen. I love that show so much I thought of fiction characters and real celebrities that would be fun to see in Hell's Kitchen. Here are my ideas:

Hell’s Kitchen:

Season 15

Host:

    1.       Gordon Ramsay

Maître d:

    1.       John Kasey from Chuck

Sous Chef:

    1.       Scott David Leibfried

    2.       Andrea Van Willigan

Red Team:

    1.       Bonnie from TVD

    2.       Jennifer Lawrence

    3.       Snooki

    4.       Ellen Degeneres

    5.       Justin Bieber

    6.       Cinderella

    7.       Zoey from Firefly

    8.       Oprah

    9.       Barbie

    10.     Buffy from Buffy the Vampire Slayer

Blue Team:

    1.       Sauce Boss from Epic Meal Time

    2.       Hercules from Disney's Hercules

    3.       Starscream from Transformers Cartoon

    4.       Micky from TMNT

    5.       Data from Star Trek

    6.       Neil Degrass Tyson

    7.       Chester A. Bum from Nostalgia Critic

    8.       Raj from Big Bang Theory

    9.       Freakout Kid from Greatest Freakout Ever

    10.     Chuck from Chuck

What do you think guys?
Hey guys, I am looking for any artist that would make characters for my story, Hybrid. It is a sci fi story about a boy named Alexander who is half human and half alien who is destined to save the galaxy from an empire of robots. I have some commission points to spend and want to spend it. Thanks!
  • Listening to: Amaranthe
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  • Playing: Boss Monster
  • Eating: Turkey Curry
  • Drinking: Mountain Dew


I have stopped watching the Vampire Diaries. Yet it is still pissing me off. One of the reasons is that it is not using the actual source which is the Vampire Diaries books. They just use the names of the characters and change their background. The writer Julie Plec (I think that is how you spell her name) fucked up most of the script and plot making the show very stupid to watch. Did she read the books or did she just do fill in the blanks on a test?



Season 3, 4, 5, and 6 has no concern about good guys fighting bad guys. It is just about bad guys winning, being cool and good looking for fans, having main characters turn against each other a lot, and have a lot of random casual sex with other characters to please the fans.



Where are the parents in the show? Caroline's mother does not count because she is barely in the show. Elena's parents died at the pilot and she and her friends get to do crazy stuff without adult supervision. What are we teaching these teenagers nowadays? Apparently is it ok to do stuff without parents and get away with it. Bullshit! If the parents were actually in the show, then it would make the show better.



Also in season 6, yeah I cheated by reading the stuff on TVD wiki where Damon and Bonnie were trapped in a prison world. Whatever that is called. How did it get created? What is between earth and those prison worlds? Is there Heaven? Is there Hell? Explain!!!!



And Kai, that worlock that is trapped with Damon and Bonnie. He tortured them while they try to find a way to get back to Earth. Damon escaped along with Kai. They fought against each other and Kai lifted the Travelers' Curse so everyone can go home. What is so special about Mystic Falls anyway? What makes it so special? Tell me!



Kai becomes a friend after all the shit he had done in the past and what he had done with Bonnie and Damon. Now they need him? They need him as an ally? What? Are you kidding me? You keeping fighting off bad guys and then need to keep them alive for some stupid reasons and the bad guys would turn on you again and again.

Seriously! They did that with Damon in season 1 while he spent most of his time killing people and have random sex with compelled women.

And Katherine (who I fucking hate) came to town to kill Elena and everyone else. Elena and the gang fought her off and imprisoned her. Was that the end? No!

Then the Original vampires came along and tried to hunt down Elena because she is a living doppleganger which is someone's exact copy whose blood is used for many magic powers. So they needed Katherine in hopes of defeating the Originals.

And then came the most awful, the most hated, the most evil, the most ruthless, and the most insane character I fucking hate a lot and that my friends is, Klaus. He was introduced in the second season and he is a Original vampire with a werewolf gene turned off. He used Elena to get that gene turned back on and he became a hybrid. Then his brother was about to kill him, but he spared him and Klaus gets to be in many episodes.

There is another problem with Klaus. The main characters are in his bloodline. If they kill him, they all die. So they treated him like any other vampire and he gets to hang out in Mystic Falls along with other villains in the show. The fans love Klaus and they kept wanting him to bang Caroline and the fans cheered. They cheered for a most hated villain to bang one of the main characters? Klaus murdered millions of people, tortured Elena many times, threatened her friends, killed her aunt Jenna, back stabbed his siblings, and fans love him?! They wanted him to stay alive because apparently he is good looking despite being an asshole.



So fans were cheering on for Klaus when they should cheer the main characters! The fans love him so much that he has his own TV show The Originals and he has a hybrid witch baby. Could this get any worse? Why can't the Originals and Klaus die and end it with that?! They killed off Klaus in the books because he was bad. But in the tv show, they spare him so he can do terrible stuff and please the fans. No way! No way!!!!!

Same thing with Kol. Fans were cheering for him when wants to make sure Jeremy doesn't kill a lot of vampires so the main characters would not get to the cure. Then Jeremy killed him and they completed the map to get to the cure.

My reaction to Kol's death was "YAY!!!!"

Fan reaction to Kol's death was "Wah!!!!"

My reaction to fans reacting to Kol's death,

Fans: I love Klaroline!
Fans: Delena forever!
Fans: Steroline!
Fans: More sex!
Fans: More hookup!
Fans: Damon!
Fans: Bamon!
Fans: Katherine, I love you!
Fans: Keep Klaus and Caroline together!
Fans: I want more Katherine!
Fans: Don't die Katherine!
Fans: Don't kill The Originals!
Fans: More Bonnie!
Fans: Yea! They're keeping The Originals and Katherine aline!
Fans: Don't die Katherine!
Fans: Keep Elena as a vampire!






The fans made the producers make The Originals! Thanks a lot fans. You get to Klaus to do more evil things and have his own show.



Elena is very annoying! As a human, she just heartwarming and caring. Until she was turned into a vampire by Damon. She loves being a vampire and bites humans. She killed many people when she turned off her humanity. Then she cared no one by herself and Damon. They spend their times fucking each other. All summer, they spent days fucking while Bonnie was dead and no one questioned it. She keeps getting fucked by Damon a lot. It is the vampire version of 50 Shades of Grey! Damon cares to getting Elena and have lots and lots of sex. He uses her for sex! Having sex with a bad person is just bad as well as being in a toxic relationship! Sex is what is about Delena! Stop fucking every episode! Delena is sex sex sex sex and more sex!



Another thing that gets off my nerves is the main character stabbing each other's backs during the show. Damon tortures Elena's friends and killed Jeremy. Then he was forgiven. Then Katherine attacks the gang. Then Klaus attacks everyone and they want him alive. Then The Originals get away with the evil stuff and move to New Orleans to start their own show. Then Elena gets her humanity turned off and kills people! Damon turns back into a bad guy and cause destruction in Mystic Falls. Then Enzo becomes an ally and then turns into a bad guy. Then he turned to ally and enemy again. Katherine was a bad guy and then turned to ally when she was dying and wanted to help. Then turned to a bad guy and take over Elena's body and then went to fucking Hell! Elena turns into a bad guy again when she tried to coup with Damon's death. Then Damon turns into a bad guy as he stalks Elena. Caroline becomes a bad guy when she turned off her humanity after her mom's death. Stefan was turned into a ripper many times. He was the bad guy in season 3 when he was working for Klaus. Then he went back to normal. Then he went back to being a ripper and fucked Caroline and they both take over Whitmore College and kill many people. Every character we care about keeps turning into villains. There are no morals in the show. Everyone in The Vampire Diaries is a bad guy! This is stupid and confusing!



Steven McQueen had left the show because he felt useless despite being a hunter. The show wanted to show just casual hookups and love triangle. That is good for him!

Nina Dobrev is my favorite actress. She left the show to try new things. It is good for her because Elena is annoying and stupid and selfish. And I hope she gets into something awesome movie or show like Marvel or DC. Anything but not vampires!

Joss Whedon, my favorite director calls The Vampire Diaries nothing but a joke. God he is so right!

So the final message to Julie Plec, the actors, and other writers, and other directors of The Vampire Diaries is this:
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Do you guys know McJuggerNuggets?

The kid who graduated from college and tries desperately to become a YouTube video gamer. But his dad keeps destroying his things while his brother records and post those videos on YouTube.

I have been watching this Youtuber's channel for a while now. And the last video two weeks ago was McJuggerNuggets destroying his dad's trophies as a way of revenge for all the things his dad destroyed. His dad then destroyed his Wii-U and was kicked out of the house. McJuggerNuggets has been kicked out of the house for two weeks now. He is now living in the woods with a tent. He has been recording and posting his daily vlogs everyday. A couple of days ago, he used his credit card to buy a new xbox and tv and guess what? He hooked those devices up in the tent and played Skyrim.

This guy can't spend the rest of his life in a tent and play video games. He needs a real job so he would be with his girlfriend, get a apartment, stop playing video games, and get a fucking life!

At first I felt bad for him because he wants to play video games for a career. But now I see him as a spoiled brat that wants to play video games and live with his parents despite the dad being an asshole. What do you guys think?

Here is the revenge video:


And here is the kicked out of the house vlogs:
www.youtube.com/playlist?list=…
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  • Reading: The Vampire Diaries
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  • Playing: Boss Monster
  • Eating: Turkey Curry
  • Drinking: Mountain Dew
I have been looking at my chapters and realized that the first chapters is not connected to the main plot even though I have a huge background. I have been looking over this with other people and they think I do need to trim this over.

Chapters I had so far:

Prologue: Spacers exiled Titans
Chapter 1: Fabocusa rescued Helen
Chapter 2: Helen was is another part of Earth with a new home
Chapter 3: Helen wanted to be with Fabocusa and was reunited with him for a while.
Chapter 4: Helen went to Spacer homeworld because she loves him.
Chapter 5: Helen and Fabocusa got married and Helen become pregnant.
Chapter 6: Seiton returns to the galaxy while Helen goes into labor.
Chapter 7: Seiton killed all the Spacers with his cyber abilities. Fabocusa has Helen go through a portal that took her to the future.
Chapter 8: Alexander is born.
Chapter 9 through 38: Alexander's story.

I wanted to get the backstory so that my readers would not be confused, but I have a feeling that these chapters should be in the book. What do you think?

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Brendan Clement
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Hey everyone! I am Brendan also known as Bclement117. I am a science fiction writer writing my own science fiction novel called Hybrid. I have been working on this story for such a long time. I have been bringing this story to life by writing it and posting these chapters to this website. After I finish writing this book, I will publish it and write more books in this series. This is for all you fans that love sci fi and fantasy. Please feel free to read the first chapters of my novel. I am open to any comments and suggestions! Enjoy!

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  • Listening to: Amaranthe
  • Reading: The Vampire Diaries
  • Watching: Big Bang Theory
  • Playing: Boss Monster
  • Eating: Turkey Curry
  • Drinking: Mountain Dew
Hey guys,

I am still editing my novels so I would be taking a long break from writing new chapters for my series. But for now, I want to write a fanfiction for Hell's Kitchen. I love that show so much I thought of fiction characters and real celebrities that would be fun to see in Hell's Kitchen. Here are my ideas:

Hell’s Kitchen:

Season 15

Host:

    1.       Gordon Ramsay

Maître d:

    1.       John Kasey from Chuck

Sous Chef:

    1.       Scott David Leibfried

    2.       Andrea Van Willigan

Red Team:

    1.       Bonnie from TVD

    2.       Jennifer Lawrence

    3.       Snooki

    4.       Ellen Degeneres

    5.       Justin Bieber

    6.       Cinderella

    7.       Zoey from Firefly

    8.       Oprah

    9.       Barbie

    10.     Buffy from Buffy the Vampire Slayer

Blue Team:

    1.       Sauce Boss from Epic Meal Time

    2.       Hercules from Disney's Hercules

    3.       Starscream from Transformers Cartoon

    4.       Micky from TMNT

    5.       Data from Star Trek

    6.       Neil Degrass Tyson

    7.       Chester A. Bum from Nostalgia Critic

    8.       Raj from Big Bang Theory

    9.       Freakout Kid from Greatest Freakout Ever

    10.     Chuck from Chuck

What do you think guys?

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